Hanna Maria

Rookie - 367 Points (Mesa Arizona)

Heaven's Weeping - Poem by Hanna Maria

Slowly, slowly Heaven’s weeping
For the children of the world
Who has evils that are seeping
Into Soul, and Simple mind

Contention brings, not one good wit
To those whose angry fumes are lit
Heartache and sorrow follow those,
And happiness flees from before them

A Sweat word can stop, a raging storm
For confusion fills their little mind
‘How can one, whom I have harmed
Turn to me and be so kind? ’

Words can so easily destroy
Yet cannot do much to mend them
Take careful thought before you say
Something that may offend them

Do not look down on those you think
Are nothing, or less than you
You may find that somewhere inside
Is a friend you never knew.

Topic(s) of this poem: corruption, friend, friendship, heaven, words


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this at a time when the people around me were always yelling and mad at each other.

Comments about Heaven's Weeping by Hanna Maria

  • (1/8/2016 10:39:00 AM)


    Great poem. I know if I created something and it turned out to be such as earth I would shed tears as well. (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (1/7/2016 12:00:00 PM)


    love, care, forgiveness, peace, friendship.

    A Sweat word can stop, a raging storm
    For confusion fills their little mind
    ‘How can one, whom I have harmed
    Turn to me and be so kind? ’
    thank you for jotting down the joys and struggles of day to day life. thank you. tony
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  • Fabrizio Frosini (10/23/2015 6:19:00 PM)


    ''I wrote this at a time when the people around me were always yelling and mad at each other.''

    your note underlines that poetry is like an oasis of peace.. ;)

    Good, Hanna
    and.. keep on posting!
    Cheers
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 23, 2015



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