surbhi aggarwal

Be Mine - Poem by surbhi aggarwal

Your divine beauty summons me,
your colloquialism makes me want you more,
your guts, your integrity,
conscious and innocence
are intoxicating.
The feelings you give me
are so alienate
that I refuse to recognize myself.
you make covetous,
you make me jealous,
You are on my mind night and day,
And I don't wanna share you ever
I want you all to be mine.
So with all my heart and courage...
I ask you
Will you come with me?

Comments about Be Mine by surbhi aggarwal

  • (4/6/2013 5:08:00 AM)

    thanks for your appreciation... (Report) Reply

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/5/2013 11:33:00 AM)

    past is past let us talk u n me at this moment, come to the point good theme a call for decision and not for division right Surabhi Its like an Atom Bomb I cant write as u wrote like a river water flow (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2013 10:47:00 AM)

    thank you so much for your admiration.. a lion poetess? ? I like the title. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (4/5/2013 10:35:00 AM)

    That's like a lion-poetess. I congratulate you for this Surbhi. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 10, 2013

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