Be Still My Beating Heart Poem by Akshita Sinha

Be Still My Beating Heart

Rating: 4.5


Be still my beating heart
For now it is too late
To correct the mistakes we made
You knew you were the bait

You had a dream
You were going to touch the stars
But the dream is gone
It's as far as mars

You soared like the wind
Had no one keep you bind
But it's not true now
As you are trapped in your own mind

But don't give up
Be sad no more
You won't have to deal with the pain
You won't have to deal with the gore

Be still my beating heart
For it is still true
That if you start anew
Your dream can come true

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was my first poem ever
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Inked Solace 09 April 2024

Good narration

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2024

This is your very first poem? ! Then you are very talented, dear Akshita! 5 Stars fullest/ highest

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2024

FIRST POEM and contains such greatest Beauty? WOW! Congrats on being chosen as Member Poem Of The Day! 5 Stars highest score from me!

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Great poem. Congratulations on POD, dear poet. And welcome to PoemHunter.

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