Gloria Rose

Beacause You Live - Poem by Gloria Rose

Standing here, all alone
Facing the cold rain
Lots of sound is going on my mind
I could barely hear them this loud
The only thing is that I’m the only who is hearing them
Because I’m in a different world
A world fulfil of people with no joys
There is just one person that I keep thinking
The only one that I’m dreaming about
And the only that I fall for
And it is you
Because you are living
You making me live too
And you making have faith and hope
Because you live and breathe
Because you making me believe in me
When nobody else could help
Because you live
My world has a thousand more stars in the sky
Because you live
I live and breathe

Comments about Beacause You Live by Gloria Rose

  • John Knight (2/4/2010 6:38:00 PM)

    Hi Gloria - Pleasure to read one of your poems. Lovely message and a lively poem - I score it a TEN. Line 7 The world is full of people with no joys - even in a beautiful and blessed country like Canada and a lovely City like Calgary - which I love. Lines 9,10,11 We can all have joy if we relate to each other. Because I am a Man I'm reading these lines to apply to me especially because of Lines 12 & 13 'Because you are living - You making me live too'. I love that idea - those of us who are poets and really really alive in other ways - reach out to each other through Poemhunters - and this experience makes us all more alive. I can relate to Lines 14 to 17. I love to impart Faith & Hope to others and Breath & Life and my prayer for you Gloria is that you will have Self Belief. When we reach out in Poetry and in Love - and when people reach out to me - There are more stars in the sky - Becasue you live Gloria - I Live and Breath. In the Poemhunter Family we are all there for each other. Ecxellent - Love in poetry - JOHN (Report) Reply

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  • (2/4/2010 6:32:00 PM)

    i like it.... very bittter sweet. nice feeling to it. (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2010 6:28:00 PM)

    It has lots of emotion and imagery, very creative. I like it! (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2010 6:27:00 PM)

    that is a really great poem it really touches the heart (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2010 6:16:00 PM)

    A lot of feeling really is amazing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 31, 2010

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