Beach Sunset Poem by Sheetal Shinde

Beach Sunset

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Beach sunset i saw that day,
My mouth was wide and was nothing to say.
What a beautiful evening was that,
Everyone there were looking by sitting on mat.
The golden shine come out of skies,
By looking at it every unhappy also smiles.
The sparkles come were just orange,
It came out from the juicy orange.
The yellow shine was spread on sea,
It looked like pure honey.
The people sat there to draw that scene,
Some said that sea looks so beautiful and clean.
The dark clouds gathering the golden ball,
It looked beautiful as dancing ball.
Now the sun is going to the west,
And everyone youned and said its time to rest.
Now its time to say goodbye to skies,
People waited there and said when will it arise.............! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 03 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Sheetal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Kee Thampi 15 October 2013

a love to the nature of......

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Rituparna Sen 09 September 2013

Good start! Just keep an eye to the grammatical part. Want to read more.

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