Monday, September 9, 2013

Beach Sunset Comments

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Beach sunset i saw that day,
My mouth was wide and was nothing to say.
What a beautiful evening was that,
Everyone there were looking by sitting on mat.
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Sheetal Shinde
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Sheetal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Kee Thampi 15 October 2013

a love to the nature of......

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Rituparna Sen 09 September 2013

Good start! Just keep an eye to the grammatical part. Want to read more.

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