Beautifal Poem by demi buxton

Beautifal

Rating: 5.0


your as sweet as a rose floating on water
your eyes shine like an angels daughter
your as tender as a butterfly just spreading its wings
your beauty is so natural
and the sunshine it brings
your off the rickto scale with madness
with you i dont feel sadness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 15 June 2009

A flowing beauty...your expression is something else...for such a young lady you have a natural born talent...keep flying

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 May 2009

Lovely metaphor, beautiful poem.10++

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Wo0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0oW.....amazing poem...it's sure 10+++

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C. P. Sharma 06 April 2009

Love is beauty and beauty love. Beautiful poetry. I loved it. CP

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Ishita Mehta 01 April 2009

i loved ur poem vry much.................n evn u seem 2 be a vry serene n dwn 2 hrt prsn...........keep on writing.............

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