your drinking booze
with your gay dudes
taken drugs with those
dirty little bugs
when your taken pills
it mounts up to bills
your familys sitting there
and you just dont give a care
with a spilff in one hand
and a can in the other
come to reality mother
by demi buxton
Deep insight into the many plagues of life..and what future damage it can cause to those around you.....very well penned....you're wise beyond your years dear Demi....keep exploring
It sounds like you have a real head on your shoulders.A very good poem to be written by a girl your age.Very very good.By the way thanks for reading one of mine
It seems you have more sense than others, there will always be people who will value you and you will find them, we never know what is around the corner of life.GBBS
my tyoung friend, I pray this is not your fate. If so, I pray that she does coem to reality.. along with all the moms liek her out there.
Difficult content, conveyed with dexterity and grace, well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is very good... it flows so smoothly... sad poem hugs cc