Sunday, November 7, 2010


Rating: 4.6
So the jaws don’t drop
When you walk down the street –
The brakes don’t screech,
And the horns don’t beep…
So the necks don’t crick
As they turn to take a look –
You walk into a room
And nobody is shook –
But hey chick;
You’re beautiful.

So there are on D’s on your report card
But all the A’s are on your chest
The boys never look twice
’Cause you don’t stand out from the rest
And your name doesn’t come up
When the mirror on the wall
Calls out the fairest of them all
And when you dress up and look your hottest
Still the boys, they never notice –
But hey chick; you’re beautiful.

They say beauty’s only skin deep
But we lack X-ray vision
And the girls that ‘just don’t cut it’
Are dismissed with derision
When all your assets are in your brains
And don’t have enough behind you;
If you can see your feet down your chest
Most of these guys just won’t mind you –
But you are who you are
And hey, chick, you’re beautiful –

And don’t you forget it.
Adeline Foster 26 November 2012
A lovely poem. Like it very much. Adeline
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Kayley Brown 01 December 2010
This poem is lovely...I think it definatly describes how the world looks at beauty and people now..Everyone is so judgemental, but reading this I can see that you see past outer beauty so good for you! Keep up the great poems! !
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Josie Lemin 18 November 2010
Beautiful is the the best poem i have ever heard omg it is gud :)
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 18 November 2010
look beyond what is seen by the naked eye.then you can see beauty deep within. nice poem.
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Miroslava Odalovic 13 November 2010
They say beauty’s only skin deep But we lack X-ray vision lol I liked the whole poem but these lines best. Guess x-ray vision is why some beauties fall in love with the beasts as well.
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Robin Serdynski 12 November 2010
i like it its very butiful keep going love robin...i even feel bad about my self but look at me now im depressed but ur really good keep it up ur really good.
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Dale Holsopple 10 November 2010
I did not give this poem a 10 rating because I personally don't like how it flows down the page, it seems to catch in parts and get jumbled on the tongue. However the subject matter is brillaint, I know entirely too many people who don't understand how good they really are.
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Chen Wenhuang 10 November 2010
nice , the beauty is in heart
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CRACK HEAD 08 November 2010
nicely put....10/10 i think its a poem that should register in the minds of all girls-women but Lord knows a lot of girls would still beg to differ
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Tyease Collins 08 November 2010
This was a really interesting poem. i love the flow of this poem its just different. 10+++ -Tyease
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