Tiffanie Lein

Rookie (1989 / Vancouver, B.C.)

`beautiful - Poem by Tiffanie Lein

Wakes at five to head for a run
She does three miles each morn
And dusk, before & after the sun
Till beads of sweat adorn

The day, she chews ever so hardly
Purges hunger with water
Consume nothing, but hunger so madly
Consuming: the thirst for slender

Her clothes in it most men glance twice
But do they know what's under?
To them, a'lil under will suffice
But what about much deeper?

Pity, only the rare'll perceive
The merit that is underneath

18 April 2008
Written for a very good friend.

Comments about `beautiful by Tiffanie Lein

  • (1/11/2009 1:04:00 AM)

    Tiffany This is very sad, but so many females particularly, try to look like skeletons through their lack of self worth. You explained it so well in this piece. Very well done! Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

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  • (4/29/2008 11:57:00 PM)

    Well structured piece...I think a lot of people will relate to this fine write

    keep this gift of yours going

    all the best

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  • (4/29/2008 8:41:00 AM)

    this was great to read many poeple could relate

    BTW i like your poems hope you keep writing
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 10, 2008

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