`undone Poem by Tiffanie Lein

`undone

Rating: 3.0


One friday by the pier
Bag in hand, and another
Above the clock struck vier*
Remained two people still under

Torn apart by war
Yet underneath one heaven
Jove could not mar
Their hearts in tune so even

'Come back soon' she whispered
Knowing it might not be
Sadness around it lingered
bringing him to his knees

'One day I'll find my way
From that forsaken place
Back here now come what may
Till then we must embrace

All aboard! now, I must leave
This ring i keep with me
If you wait like i believe
In time it'll stay on thee.

So take this rugged palm
Belonging to one forlorn
Pray now, quoting by the Psalm
Before we come undone.'

*German for 4.
24 Jan 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 29 March 2008

tiffanie, love poem.

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Francis Duggan 25 January 2008

This is a very good poem Tiffanie just the type of poem that one can read again and again, marvellous

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Shannon Wright 24 January 2008

Tiffanie- This touched my heart. my love returned from the war on Sunday. another ten. keep up the wonderful work. -shannon

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