frost bitten rain drop
watched by crystal eyes
spinning in whirl-winds
dancing across still skies
loved by many
across the feilds it flies
but even with the beauty
a broken heart dies
what an interesting choice to use numbers for the rhyme at the end of the poem- works well
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like this poem. I think this poem can be viewed as deeper than what I viewed it as, tho. Not sure, this makes the poem good. Mike Chen