poet Naomi Hartnell

Naomi Hartnell

Beautiful Freak

How gracefully you move.
Lost so alone,
wandering the twisted tracks of your,
discontented mind.
Shut away from the outside world,
feeling like one of a kind.

Skin like porcelain,
veiled behind your flowing ebony hair.
Intrigued i wonder: what goes on behind,
those piercing blue eyes and,
entrancing vacant stare?

safely locked away in your,
own secure domain.
With every ambitious note you play,
your heart speaks.
Like fate once again, our paths have crossed.
We are together against them, so alone.
Your unique my beautiful freak.

Poem Submitted: Friday, October 12, 2007
Poem Edited: Saturday, April 16, 2011

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Comments about Beautiful Freak by Naomi Hartnell

  • Mark Jarrad (9/18/2009 5:38:00 AM)

    i like this poem, i read one of your poems before and thought that was good too.. i will definitely read more of them.

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  • Elsa Bennett (6/9/2009 5:45:00 PM)

    I think this is an incredibly beautiful poem. Defintiely a 10.

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