Beauty Comments

I know you are tired of your age being made to sound as if you are so so young- but you are so young and yet you are writing like an old trooper; it's astounding in every way. Like Patrick said; whatever you do, don't stop writing, and if somebody tries to shoot you down, just remember: they must be jealous..(smile)

An honest love indeed

wonderful poem..............

well penned and beautiful follow.. thanks for sharing.. hazem al..

rhyming comes naturally to you...a good adoring piece on/for your love...thanks...10

well written poem, nice portrait, thank you for sharing........10

Could I but have you for my love, How might we fly together! But I must watch you from below And long for you forever. But I must be the one below And long for you forever. u must offer undonditional and pure love and it will be possible for you to have her with you.. it's beauty is to see and enjoy it... lovley poem....10 read mine beauty.....miss i miss u...mary to marry