Sunday, September 30, 2012

Beauty Comments

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Some say, beauty is but an opinion
Wrapped in wafer thin layers like onion,
Had it been heftier a fact,
It would be e’er the more perfect;
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Indira Renganathan 02 June 2019

" If or not be it a mere opinion Discarded as if layers of onion, And yet, a layer no less onion is, As man is known by opinions of his! " .....beautiful..the comparison of beauty with onion gives the best beauty to the poem..superb

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 June 2019

Thank you dear poet, I think, 'tongue-in-cheek' can one get away with a murder, almost.

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