Friday, May 29, 2009

Beauty Surrounds Me Comments

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Beauty surrounds me
I hold my breath for fear that it may all disappear
The gentle hum of the hummingbirds wings
enticing my eyes to shed a tear
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Berta Vieira
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009

Beauty lies in the eyes, mind and aesthetic heart of the beholder.

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Lynn Glover 08 August 2009

Hi Berta: Tlhis is a very good structured poem, with terrific rhythem, you did just a great job. Your friend in Poetry Lynn

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