Wednesday, August 29, 2007

Beauty Within Comments

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Its a well known fact that the beauty intact
In your body and soul is shown in you
With the things that you do and the way you can act
Makes my heart have desires raging with fires
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Margaret Alice 30 August 2007

This is really a most enjoyable rhyme and the poet emphasises the fact that beauty is more than skin-deep - 'wonderful heart, beautiful body and soul - lies concealed within' - therefore the poet's desire to create a positive experience for the object of his affection becomes an expression of appreciation for something extraordinary - thank you for this contribution and keep writing! Kind regards, Margaret.

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