Monday, October 5, 2015

Because I Love You Comments

Rating: 4.5

The smell of your sweet skin,
So beautiful, it seems like a sin.
I taste it upon my lips,
Your touch across my hips.
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G J Salgado
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Chinedu Dike 10 October 2015

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction from inner recesses of the heart. A good depiction of love as a voyage of pure bliss. A lovely poem subtly written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Jennie. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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