Before. Poem by Sandra jacks

Before.

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Exactly what do you e x p e c t............. from me,
every((Is it)) thing?
because ifitis,
I can only GIVE you,
less then that,
of what you wish,
less of precision,
on the least sharp list and i,
i can't give you much,
com par ed to,
what you're asking for,
Unless you mean less,
then what you asked of,



B e F o R e

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kara Towe 23 December 2011

We can only give what we can give. Some people ask too much, wear us down, because they are selfish, (weak) . It is the strong who are humble, and your poem depicts this to me. Great write, food for thought, we should all reevaluate ourselves, like the old saying says, don't throw pearls at swine. Keep up the good work, looking forward to reading more of your poems. Thanks for sharing :)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 August 2008

..well said...........................10

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