Friday, December 7, 2007

Before I Die Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I was to die next week
I wouldn't try to weap
I wouldn't try to cry
I wouldn't try to have hatred inside me
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Erica Lee
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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2021

5 Stars full for your excellent poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2021

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Poet Of The Day. Most deserving!

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Good understanding of finality of life and what ought to do or not to do is once own conviction and it is nice to see in this poem. interested.

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Meggie Gultiano 13 December 2007

You have a very good perception of what death is, and you are prepared! But you are still young, you have still plenty of nice things to do to the people you've mentioned here..I salute you, my dear for being concerned, and for being you Love, Meggie

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Lesa K 07 December 2007

lovely piece... thank you for sharing your comforting words...

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Erica Lee

Flushing, Queens, NY, US
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