Saturday, February 16, 2019

Before The Day Is Done Comments

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Thought, let me my pockets check,
Check, things done and not, day on deck.

Let me check today's to-do list,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

Thank you so much Devanshu for the generous feedback. But it's rare that a translation is better than the original. Thank you any way.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 February 2019

beautiful translation beautiful writings - My grief and regrets on credit, My happiness on the debit, .../// this life is alive through credit and debit!

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 February 2019

Thank you, Mahtab Bangalee, great, you seem to know Gujarati as well! But I'm yet to hear from the original writer of this poem, and till then fingers crossed..

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