Monday, November 5, 2018

Before You Raise Your Flag Comments

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The headline told a lie, hiding the scratches of a failed government
We crave for redemption yet we are the sin committed
A suffocating truth carved against our egos and pride
Awoken from the slumber we are forced to dine in, to seek a light
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Onwubuariri Jachinma
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Onwubuariri. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chukwuebuka Adebayo 05 November 2018

I bu ezigbo nwanne.ezi okwu bu okwu gi niile.daalu maka nka.Nno o?

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Chinedu Dike 05 November 2018

Poignant reflection crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing Jachinma.

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