elysabeth faslund

Rookie (11/23/49 / Thibodaux. Louisiana)

Beggar: Man Or King? - Poem by elysabeth faslund

Coin commemorates
Accomplishments of a king.
A man begs for food.

Comments about Beggar: Man Or King? by elysabeth faslund

  • (8/1/2007 10:11:00 PM)

    The haves and the have nots. A perfect mix of contemporary haiku style and timeless truth. You pen flows with great skill. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

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  • (7/31/2007 2:12:00 PM)

    Haiku(dos) to you for a concise gem! (Report) Reply

  • (7/30/2007 2:47:00 PM)

    Darn good poem. Love it. Zen (Report) Reply

  • (7/25/2007 1:39:00 PM)

    This is truly a modern haiku par excellence. You capture one moment of an essential truth and open up the horizon of ages of social inequity. Great! (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (7/22/2007 7:25:00 PM)

    In three lines you have written a great message. Fantastic! (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/22/2007 7:24:00 PM)

    And the Kings image will serve as the beggars bite...
    Very Nice contemporary 'Ku, young lady....Actually had a wee bot of spare time today...You had just posted this poem as i logged in....Just thought i'd stop by & say hello & enjoya read by a very fine potess(that be you) ...Hope you're enjoying your summer, Elysabeth...

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 22, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 23, 2011

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