Beggars Galore Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Beggars Galore

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Beggars beg, temple's all aside,
I plead from its sanctum inside,
Beggars all, with without a bowl,
Me a sly one, bowl on the hide!
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Musings |18.10.2020|
Topic: god, prayer, pleading Form: epigram

Friday, November 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: god
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A muktak here, a quatrain with a rhyme scheme of a/a/b/a. It literally means: an independent, freely expressed thought. In Sanskrit, many subhaashits (t is soft)are of this genre.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 13 December 2020

I have read this interpretation at many places and in many forms. But the way you have retained its essence and message is unique. The poem is beautifully rhymed which is a pleasure to read. Thanks a lot.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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