Parting cuckoo where her calls go?
Cut off from coast where sea would go?
Unfolding time dies duly blurred,
Where would the vicissitudes go?
If breath ceases with spoken word,
How farther would the echoes go?
Failing to fetch world's whimsy eyes,
To dust would a poet's pen go?
The cardinal bytes getting lulled,
Where would in time the footprints go?
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Ghazal |06.08.2020|
Topic: bird, sea, poet, pen, time
If breath ceases with spoken word, How farther would the echoes go? .... //.... These are some of the most legitimate queries that may arise in the mind of a man at the crossroads of life which goes on uninterrupted on the surface while the questions of philosophical nature continue to churn human consciousness. Thanks, Aniruddha Sir.
A magnificent poetic expression. Truly brilliant and excellent....10++
Parting cuckoo where her calls go? Cut off from coast where sea would go? Unfolding time dies duly blurred, Where would the vicissitudes go? If breath ceases with spoken word, How farther would the echoes go? - - - - An amazingly beautiful write !
A beautiful poem amazingly crafted. Everything has a place to go. It is called the Time...10
Everything happens and we witness the scene and hear the tune of chirping of birds including singing of cuckoo. But after few says everything changes due to seasonal changing. Many natural footprints we see and keep in memory but in reality these go away. An amazing poem is well penned.
" If breath ceases with spoken word, How farther would the echoes go." Wonderful lines from a great poem. To my Poem List.
A very touching and deeply poignant write. Wonderful poetic expressions that convey thoughts to ponder about. Liked how this poem has been presented. The great Poet's recurring words in every stanza enhanced the beauty of this magnificent poem.
Where would in time the footprints go.... Nowhere but covered with past Until someone upturns Dawning my day. Beautiful write. Thank-you Sir for your prescious comments.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An elegant meaningful poem.