asef fakih

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Belief - Poem by asef fakih

Would it be weird
if the long and lonely path of life
seemed like a glimpse
of what I expect.
The vocal controversy of beliefs
gets tired of useless debate.
I surely don't feel right.
I feel insecure from my own logic.
Tragic stories seem funny while
I think, what if,
the sky one day was not promised
to fall apart, the sun was not
promised to burn out.
Belief of future is far beyond life,
It never binds us
to the blue, beloved planet,
but it makes us love our life more.
The life of a non believer fades
they do not see,
no site, no visions of the promised land.
They are the fading shadows.


Comments about Belief by asef fakih

  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/19/2008 8:08:00 AM)

    powerful expression! nice imagery..........10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Maria C. Pires CostaMaria C. Pires Costa (10/14/2008 4:24:00 AM)

    Dear Asef,
    Being so young you've been enlightened for writing such relevant thoughts!
    Keep up with your poem writing and you'll surely open gleaming 'paths of life' for all of us to walk through.
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  • Ershad MazumderErshad Mazumder (10/13/2008 9:31:00 PM)

    Very good dear asef. Poetry is a dream. Keep people dreaming. Greatest dream will be a greatest poem. Thanks. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 14, 2008


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