Believe In His Power Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Believe In His Power
Love the life from different angle
It is not always full of struggle
Never tire out or wear
It is only inside fear
I know for sure
Devil may certainly cure
Leave you in happiness
As you will always show cheers
Goodness may prevail
With darkness to trail
Only bright light may appear
To take you out of tears
Love and live peacefully
As this is only way to lead successfully
No one can come and guide
It is you only who should take lead
Let us start from day one
Let the opportunities be gained
Let us put brave front
There won’t be anything to bear with brunt
Believe in his power
He is your mentor
He shall show you the way
Be form on ground and stay
lots of feeling, but... James Austin9 minutes ago they didn't really come to life. Don't just show me the emotional word, prove it to me with texture and dimension.
Allright Sharon Valerio4 minutes ago Lots of grammar mistakes, but I like the overall feel. I wonder though, who is He at the end? If you said earlier on No one can come and guide It is you only who should take lead. Comment +1
Re: Believe in his power (Score: 1) by Veils_Mistress on Wednesday, April 23,2014 (00: 37: 23) When I call to talk to Him, he doesn't answer. He sends me a postcard and a small gift. Nice poem though, you Children have it good Wink The soldiers and angels wait for His dialogue- never seems to register on the feed.
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Love the life from different angle It is not always full of struggle