Believe In His Power Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India

Believe In His Power

Rating: 5.0
 


Love the life from different angle
It is not always full of struggle
Never tire out or wear
It is only inside fear

I know for sure
Devil may certainly cure
Leave you in happiness
As you will always show cheers

Goodness may prevail
With darkness to trail
Only bright light may appear
To take you out of tears

Love and live peacefully
As this is only way to lead successfully
No one can come and guide
It is you only who should take lead

Let us start from day one
Let the opportunities be gained
Let us put brave front
There won’t be anything to bear with brunt

Believe in his power
He is your mentor
He shall show you the way
Be form on ground and stay

Tuesday, April 22, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

Love the life from different angle It is not always full of struggle

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

lots of feeling, but... James Austin9 minutes ago they didn't really come to life. Don't just show me the emotional word, prove it to me with texture and dimension.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

Allright Sharon Valerio4 minutes ago Lots of grammar mistakes, but I like the overall feel. I wonder though, who is He at the end? If you said earlier on No one can come and guide It is you only who should take lead. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

cool Jaleesa Osborne9 minutes ago Cool

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

Nice Mallika Dhar9 minutes ago Very good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2014

Re: Believe in his power (Score: 1) by Veils_Mistress on Wednesday, April 23,2014 (00: 37: 23) When I call to talk to Him, he doesn't answer. He sends me a postcard and a small gift. Nice poem though, you Children have it good Wink The soldiers and angels wait for His dialogue- never seems to register on the feed.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

welcome ramesh rai 6 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

welcome rohini daud 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome reameshbhai 2 secs · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Emilia Ayuk likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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