Belive Poem by janice etienne

Belive



Dark as my world may seem
I roam through a world of dreams
Through the kisses of the misty winds
And all the places my tears has been

Through time I am alone
Traveling to a place where I belong
Memories living in my shade
And so they start to fade

Words like echoes in my head
Reminding me of the things I bleed
Where am I going? I don't know
Far from where it's cold

Escaping with my worthless soul
So the sun may shine with rays of gold
And my soul may be luminous, from gloom, and bold
To wherever my heart may lead
To a place where I believe

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Jason Dye 26 October 2008

Nice poem. Belief is one of the most important things. Always wonder before you doubt. However there are some grammatical and spelling errors but I thought them cute and innocent.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 10 September 2008

Hello Janice and it is great to have faith and be able to believe. A good read. Loyd

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DELETED NOW 23 April 2008

tis is like when u believe in something and ppl believe in another and that makes u believe in that so u feel like just saying I always going to believe in this! but then later u totally change ur mind and it's like good thing I didn't say that

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Michael Pruchnicki 19 April 2008

Echoes in one's head are the makings of a good poet! You make your soul shine with rays of gold from your own sun! That place where you may believe is within! Regards, Michael

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