Certain things, we can see,
Certain things, we can never,
In between there are something else,
That we can see but we don't,
We need to find out those,
We can't avoid these,
Black chapters of our life,
We need to be special,
In our thoughts and deeds,
We need to be individual,
We should evaluate us,
For this we should fix those out,
Lets figure out the open secrets,
Those are hidden surround us,
Beneath the enlightened lamp.
We can improve only when our ordinary lamp becomes an enlightened lamp. Good. What is enlightenment? Seeing the same situation from a higher level of perception. It will certainly offer a better solution.
Very well written Kafil....really enjoyed this enlighting piece...well done 10
Kafil, I'm searching for this lamp, but I haven't found it yet. It hasn't stopped me searching though... Frank
lovely poem.....the idea is harder said than done though well we can only try our best....right?
A strange poem, though lovely. So linear, not like Kafil's other children. Wise words, wise indeed. Can you do it? no. Can we? no. In deeds we should improve not in words. no more 10++
A beautiful poem and an idea you put into it..Thanks for sharing :) A.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beneath us, the light to enlighten us. Interesting lines.