Monday, August 22, 2016

Berry Smoothie Comments

Rating: 4.3

Her given name is Berry Smoothie
Her color just says it all
I found her with many others
She'll be short, yes not too tall.
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Marilyn Lott
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Kim Barney 23 August 2016

This poem is berry smooth. It flows like a cool vanilla shake. When I saw your title I thought the poem would be about something edible (well, I guess you could eat a flower) but I loved the poem anyway. Well done.

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