James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Sunday, September 6, 2009

Beside Me Is Still Some Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beside me is still some water; and therein I lay,
sloughing off bark where mossy patches dream.
Funny how time lets dreams float away, down
stream, while the forest moves it in, ever closer.
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COMMENTS
Sonya Florentino 04 November 2009

i don't have a clue what you're talking about here but that doesn't mean I don't find it beautiful.... :)

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Goldy Locks 06 September 2009

Pleasant poetry. Imaginative, complex yet refined and simple. Keep on, goldy

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Tai Chi Italy 06 September 2009

Stunning imagery here my friend...the final lines are masterful. Smiling at you Tai

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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