Alc Harris

Rookie (England)

Betrayal - Poem by Alc Harris

Sticks in the throat,
till death to choke.
After the knives
comes the ache
sad farewell
to what once was.

Comments about Betrayal by Alc Harris

  • (9/26/2006 1:20:00 PM)

    the last two lines killed the flow of this piece, which was pretty alright until that point. this short of a poem would definitly benefit from a ryhme scheme of some sort. re-write it again with ryhme and skill and maybe you could have a poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/2/2005 7:04:00 PM)

    the mystery of pain
    need to grap it before it grabs us
    nice work!
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 2, 2005

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