Betrayed Poem by Syed Peerzada Aurangzeb

Betrayed

Rating: 5.0


Burned ashes of my dreams
Collapsed glaciers of snow white
Eyes remained alive
Whereas the soul scratched by the gentle hands
Betrayed.

Sunday, November 18, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: ashes,snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 24 December 2012

I like the effect of the ashes and the snow..contrast that deeply meaningful as both are the hard challenge to face..the betrayer, dark and white...how to guess_Soul

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Bright Morn 23 November 2012

soul scratched by gentle hands, great lines, very good poem. thanks for sharing

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