Betrayl Poem by Silver Akira

Betrayl

Rating: 4.3


I see it now all so clearly,
Again I have been lied to,
But instead of crying so much like I want to,
I run into the forest where I feel at home,
The night calls to me,
And a small breeze caresses my face,
I close my eyes,
And all my memories of you flash through my mind,
A single tear slides down my cheek,
Landing on the soft ground below my feet,
I am calm and collected unusual for something this big,
My parents are out,
And I am alone,
But that's ok I need to think about your sudden betrayl,
I thought you could do no wrong but,
Look what you did,
I can't even walk away unscathed,
Even now I am losing another piece of myself,
I stand still your words of pain haunting my very thoughts,
The more I think,
The worse it gets,
Around me I can hear the animals of the forest,
Softly making sounds as if afraid of me...

Sunday, February 5, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: animals
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Natalie Olivia 05 January 2014

Very sad, you can feel the hurt. I liked this line Even now I am losing another piece of myself, I stand still your words of pain haunting my very thoughts, well done

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Elya Thorn 05 February 2006

Such a beautiful writing, and strong, powerfull in the feeling it expresses, I had to give it a 10! well done! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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