Tuesday, July 17, 2018

Better If I Died Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flames dancing all around me
Im burning from the inside out
Im shaking like im having convulsions
My brain is being smothered. Im going to pass out
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Christina Pedregon
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 July 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Christina. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Robert Murray Smith 17 July 2018

When love dies the fire goes out. Meeting another creates a new fire. Well expressed.++10

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Lyn Paul 17 July 2018

The pain of heartache does go away. We grow with pain and learn so much from it. Thank you for sharing your words. Writing is the biggest healer.

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