Between Life & Death Comments

An amazing thought....a sublime poem.....superb. Thank you very much.

The last stanza is marvellous: 'What people think He had a life or a double death. Waiting for the night again Waiting for a borrowed heaven! '. Enjoyed this piece.

Nice expression.Keep up the great work!

so much agony hidden in between the lines...the commencing lines really hurt...promises live, dying...in between life and death is expectant yearning losing out slowly bitterly...poem painfully expressive...highly introspective 10/10

Ei kobitati amar valolegeche didi.