Sunday, July 5, 2015

Beyond Beautiful Comments

Rating: 4.5

The creator of the universe,
The almighty of all,
The time has come,
He granted himself a wish,
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Avinash kashyap
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Chinedu Dike 06 July 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with spiritual insight. A praise and devotional poem depicting the infinite beauty of THE LORD. A lovely one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Dedan Onyango 06 July 2015

Well use of short lines, makes the poem have a classical appeal. Good work Avinash.

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Kelly Kurt 05 July 2015

A beautiful poem, Avinash. Thanks for sharing Peace

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