chandra kant manas

Rookie - 0 Points (08/07/1991 / patna)

Beyond Limits - Poem by chandra kant manas

Wind was hot and lonely was day,
walking patiently on my way,
I came by a Patli tree,
staring on me smilingly said he.

"Listen the words which i will tell,
not an epic but a great tale,
it is the story of a bird,
whose will could tremble your heart."

"he is the bird of limitless sky,
to all heads passing by,
his story i will narrate,
the story of vanquishing his fate."

"He was ready to start the flight,
convulsive was weather and formidable was the plight,
hindrances were tough and bold,
still his wings remained unfold."

"soon he was able to touch my tip,
unfortunately this place he couldn't keep,
wind came there like a whirl,
sky-rocketing speed and with increasing curl"

"the tender bird opposed a lot,
but in the wind he was caught,
Wind was up and wind was down,
analogous to hell it was all around"

"the bloody wind was forcing to stop,
but he endeavored to reach the top,
in this combat his wings were torn,
on the condition he mourned and mourned"

"he again challenged the wind,
alas his fate he couldn't triumph,
wind threw him far apart,
but his will he couldn't depart"

"once again he gathered his courage,
marched in the sky to break the cage,
this time the wind got frailed,
his torrential efforts he also hailed"

"Laughing merrily bird kissed the sky,
the essence of victory was in his eyes,
while departing he said few words,
those were the best ever I heard"

"Die if you cant reach,
better do work than preach,
life without dreams are deceased,
so walk until your last breath"


Comments about Beyond Limits by chandra kant manas

  • Chandra Kant Manas (8/28/2012 3:08:00 AM)


    thanks kelvin and romeo..................i am hopeful that your suggestions will help me a lot......again thanks a ton (Report) Reply

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  • Kelvin Owusu (8/28/2012 1:34:00 AM)


    this is possibly one of the best work I've seen in the past weeks. i enjoyed the read. the last few lines very inspiring must say, great work (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (8/26/2012 12:25:00 PM)


    WELCOME to the Poetry World dear Chandra! Wow! What a way to enter into the Poetry World with such an amazing and well crafted write where Beauty and Talent are magically blended making this poem absolutely thought provoking! 10+++ Hoping that you will keep inspiring the World with more of your touching works! God Bless You! Romeo from New York City! Love and Peace for always! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 26, 2012



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