Saturday, January 17, 2026

Beyond The Fall Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Wind blows
The Tree bows
The leaves sweep the floor.
But as of now... it grows.
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Koffi B Sossou
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Timber Koleden 04 February 2026

It took me a few times to read this poem over to fully grasp its worth! Such powerful imagery employed to communicate eternal truth! Makes it to my favorites!

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Koffi B Sossou 07 February 2026

Thank you, Timber. This poem is more than any fear.

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Timber Koleden 04 February 2026

A wonderful tribute to new life in Christ!

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Timber Koleden 04 February 2026

An important poem with deep and profound implications! Well written! Thank you for this piece!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 January 2026

The closure line delivers an impactful message. Liked the picture that goes with this great poem.

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Koffi B Sossou 05 February 2026

Thank you, Rose. I intended to make the poem a bit lengthier, but after the first 6 lines, I felt the need to conclude it; what I did.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 January 2026

A very stirring poem...so thought provoking. Seven brilliant lines so well executed with superb imagery. To my favorites!

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Koffi B Sossou 05 February 2026

After all, I am happy to convey a powerful message through those lines.

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Rob Lamberton 18 January 2026

I think of perfect love that casts out fear.

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Rob Lamberton 18 January 2026

A poem that stretches the mind.

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Koffi B Sossou 18 January 2026

Firm we stand, for Christ chooses for us.

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