Monday, June 26, 2017

Bicycle In Bustle Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bicycle in Bustle

Trin! Trin! I get a new bicycle on rent
Pretty blue, embedded reflector and a bell of melody
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Kanupriya Kothiwal
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Chinedu Dike 26 June 2017

An insightful analogy drawn between riding a bicycle and life. A well thought-out poem. Thanks for sharing Kanupriya.

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Roxanne Dubarry 26 June 2017

A day in the life of a maiden's bike ride. She encounters several people, and writes a delightful poem! Your poem is worth five golden stars!

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Cheryl Tutaan 26 June 2017

Such a beautiful write, full of inspiration...Thank you for sharing...a big 10

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 June 2017

caution, patience, busy streets, you are on your path on your journey on your bicycle..learning to ride again and again in the bustle and in the crowd...... thank you very much for your poem.tony

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