Bird's Eye Only Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Bird's Eye Only

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See the bird’s eye only
While shooting resolutely
The purpose will be served
The fortune may pave the way as deserved

An idle man may have nothing
As he will wait for coming monsoon
The showers may fail his planning
As it may be unsuitable for his designing

“Idleness is greatest enemy of all”
That shall always starve not one but many
The ripe fruit may not fall directly into mouth
As it also wants direct hit for come down forthwith

The legend says” bear one point in mind”
Never present untruth of any kind
That shall not grant you honest status
You shall remain always poor thus

Built trust and confidence
That shall quickly offer you chance
People will soon invest in you
There shall be enough of time to prove true

Once rail is on track
There won’t me much at stake
People will follow you blindly
The effort may bear fruit steadily

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 January 2014

Amazing Cheyanne Kelly24 minutes ago I really love this poem. The grammar tripped me up a little bit but that may be the way i was interpreting it. The second to last stanza the second line it appears that me should be be Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 January 2014

good Joanna McCartney21 minutes ago nice word structure

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 January 2014

Amazing Cheyanne KellyLess than a minute ago I really love this poem. The grammar tripped me up a little bit but that may be the way i was interpreting it. The second to last stanza the second line it appears that me should be be Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 January 2014

Pass Briso XLess than a minute ago PASS

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 January 2014

See the bird’s eye only While shooting resolutely

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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