Bird Song Poem by Marton Dezso

bird song nice and enjoyed................

A pithy little poem about choice. So easy to fall into the trap of violence. And so difficult to crawl out of it too. You use metaphor very effectively in this succinct, interesting poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

there is this road I shouldn't take there is this bird I shouldn't make fly no more............................................. end of journey may toll sorrow further flying may be reason of fall...............wonderful words of wisdom, wroght ingenious by metaphor,10+++, thanks for sharing

hmm love reading peace related poems and thoughts as i am also peace lover and known peace wisher poet... your work is almost heart feeling and based on hidden peace.. rich idea this poem has owned... and the way you write is great..well done... like your short poem...there is this road I shouldn't take there is this bird I shouldn't make fly no more. earth crashed its bones and stone 10++++++++++++++++

Singing and seeing world from a bird's eye. Nice poem, Marton.

I enjoyed it, cheers with 10++++