I was created from the earth
Just like him but before him
The first woman the first wife I am
As equal I didn't bow before him.
On wings of storm on mist of sea I ran
But the Three were sent to catch me
'Drown me in the water if you can! '
But they didn't dare to test me.
My skin is like the avid moon
My hair the crawling snakes of fire
Only death spreads from my womb
On your tomb I will carve desire.
My skin is like the avid moon My hair the crawling snakes of fire Only death spreads from my womb On your tomb I will carve desire what a sweet stanza...enjoyed your whole poem..meaningful one..10/10
What a wonderful, but brief spin on Lilith, the first mythological wife of Adam.
A well crafted, 'interesting' poem with a fascinating narrative. The sort of poem that demands a 'google' search to find out more. You use words very effectively and economically to pick the eyes out of your story and leave the reader knowing more than they imagine. I am enjoying your work. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
'Drown me in the water if you can! ' But they didn't dare to test me well penned....voted 10..
The poem is like the depth of ' pacific cliff '.Words are as fresh as morning garden.Good job Marton.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
My skin is like the avid moon My hair the crawling snakes of fire Only death spreads from my womb On your tomb I will carve desire. well poetic words, , , , , , , , , .cheers with 10+++++