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Perfect number of syllables for the classic haiku pattern. Some unkind person has voted this poem a four. I have voted it a ten to make the average seven. Did you know that you can delete all the votes and start over if you want?
Thank you. I appreciate your positive feedback. I posted a lot of these poems when I was younger, so they're not that great :) , but I used to write a lot of poetry for school projects and I really liked it. I had all but forgot that I had put these poems on this site.
Great imagery and nice haiku....loved it