But no friends,
You can't call
Any one your friend.
Also see
Each neighbour is envious.
You are to see
Your own face
In your own mirror.
Also you can say
How bare
How uncomfortable you are.
Since each one is preoccupied
With his and her own self.
Here see
Nothing is tasty.
Door is opened
But see
No one is there to enter.
Sir my humble suggestion would be for you to add a line...At your borthday party... after every verse or at the end of the poem. Sorry if i spoiled your birthday poem (party)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You are to see Your own face In your own mirror. Also you can say How bare How uncomfortable you are. introspection and self analysis two vital elements...... liked the idea.. Thanks