Soha Bayat Kheradmand

Black N' White..! - Poem by Soha Bayat Kheradmand

They say we should see stuff in black N' white

U have 2 choices:

One. Black
Two. White

I say we should see colors that fight
sometimes they're green sometimes they're red

In colors U find always a might
Yellow for toe N' purple for head
In colors U see the dance of light

Each place U name It: the colors right
Its like north or maybe south

In black N' white Its day N' night
The choices U have are just too tight
theres non to fight

Its like you're in or U are out! !

(Soha Bayat Kheradmand)

Comments about Black N' White..! by Soha Bayat Kheradmand

  • Emily OldhamEmily Oldham (9/28/2008 1:09:00 PM)

    nice but could be better...thanks though, its pretty good (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (8/29/2008 11:01:00 PM)

    A nice simple verse, enjoyable. (Report)Reply

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  • Jack Tex (8/4/2008 8:31:00 AM)

    Good but let me let you in on a little something: Well, as far as poetry goes, rap is totally out. For what it's worth, I say you revision this one because I'm sure potentially it's a nice poem but practically, it needs further work. Thanks anyways.

    Take care,

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 30, 2008

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