Black N' White..! Poem by Soha Bayat Kheradmand

Black N' White..!



They say we should see stuff in black N' white


U have 2 choices:

One. Black
Two. White


I say we should see colors that fight
sometimes they're green sometimes they're red

In colors U find always a might
Yellow for toe N' purple for head
In colors U see the dance of light



Each place U name It: the colors right
Its like north or maybe south

In black N' white Its day N' night
The choices U have are just too tight
theres non to fight


Its like you're in or U are out! !


(Soha Bayat Kheradmand)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 28 September 2008

nice but could be better...thanks though, its pretty good

0 0 Reply
Ashraful Musaddeq 29 August 2008

A nice simple verse, enjoyable.

0 0 Reply
Jack Tex 04 August 2008

Good but let me let you in on a little something: Well, as far as poetry goes, rap is totally out. For what it's worth, I say you revision this one because I'm sure potentially it's a nice poem but practically, it needs further work. Thanks anyways. Take care, Mohammad

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success