Black Roses Poem by Anitah Muwanguzi

Black Roses

Rating: 5.0


Fingers to lips

still alive but barely breathing

black roses strewn over my heart

songs drip with broken promises

falling to pieces

dead after dead

heart broken after being broken, breaks again a little more

No: band aids will not do

You took my love from me, and my identity with you

Vultures circle my broken heart

Every flash of light I reject

This gloom is at least a part of you I don’t want to lose

Black Roses
Thursday, November 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anitah Muwanguzi 24 November 2015

Souren Mondal thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read. Wow thanks for the vote too.

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Anitah Muwanguzi 24 November 2015

Souren Mondal, thanks for reading, appreciating and commenting.

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Souren Mondal 24 November 2015

This is a real 'blues poem' for me.. The imagery is incredible (particularly of the vultures circling the heart) and the metaphor of the 'black rose' hits home to perfection. An incredible poem Anitah. One of the better ones I have read today.. Thanks for sharing..

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