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Tongue Twisted

Rating: 5.0

my two- faced tongue rammed a fist in my gut today

got away from me and I never stood a chance

somehow what I meant to say didn’t quite make the cut

my eyes huge bulges hang outside their sockets

I am carefully paraphrasing and retracing my steps to no avail

now mired in the dark bog of my tongue admissions
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Tongue Twisted
Thursday, November 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Putting my foot in it..................
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anitah Muwanguzi 25 November 2015

Dr. Tony Brahmin thanks alot for the compliments and thoughts

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Anitah Muwanguzi 25 November 2015

Kumar thanks alot for the lovely thoughts.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 November 2015

Introspection, guts, pain, powerful will and at the end the great readiness to ask pardon all combined in one beautiful poem. thank you Poetess. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 November 2015

Straight from heart it flows so nice. Loved it.

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Anitah Muwanguzi 19 November 2015

Mishra will definitely get hold of some yet to be discovered courage and do so.

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Anitah Muwanguzi 19 November 2015

Manga thanks for the wonderful thoughts.

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Rajnish Manga 19 November 2015

It needs courage, guts and conviction to introspect and come out with something self defeating. This is a beautiful poem though, sprinkled with pain all over. Be hopeful. somehow what I meant to say didn’t quite make the cut I have only to apologize and hope it is enough

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Gajanan Mishra 19 November 2015

apogize and it's enough, good one..

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