Blackness Poem by valsala shan

Blackness

Rating: 5.0


Dark, brooding thoughts penetrate this numb hollow…
Piercing shots of ivory slicing through this ebony…
Rippling in echoes, shrouded in columns of grey billows…
Screaming in ecstasy, writhing in nameless harmony…

Blackness envelopes this space of thoughts..
Emptiness fills the lonely corners of this illusion…
Mindless nothingness merging in confusion fraught…
So close yet so far this meaningless delusion…

Searching for meaning in this maze of distractions…
Gazing into the light for some kind of directions…
Lifted from the abysses of unfounded subtractions…
Waiting for answers in this seamless weave of dimensions…

Waiting for answers in this seamless weave of dimensions..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Johnson 06 April 2009

A very well written, piece, thank you for sharing, Valsala

0 0 Reply
Alex Gomez 06 April 2009

Wow, brilliant! Exceptional vocabulary usage and an outstanding poem! Probably better than anything I could do.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success