Monday, April 6, 2009

Blackness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark, brooding thoughts penetrate this numb hollow…
Piercing shots of ivory slicing through this ebony…
Rippling in echoes, shrouded in columns of grey billows…
Screaming in ecstasy, writhing in nameless harmony…
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Howard Johnson 06 April 2009

A very well written, piece, thank you for sharing, Valsala

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Alex Gomez 06 April 2009

Wow, brilliant! Exceptional vocabulary usage and an outstanding poem! Probably better than anything I could do.

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